in the past of years mankind have seen how technology progress, in the middle ages we communicate through letters, and we acquire knowledge in the books we read, then with the past of ages we develop different ways to communicate whit each other like the phone, during the last decades humanity invented the internet, a new way to communicate whit everyone from everywhere, and let us acquire information about anything, also know we can share our feeling to other through this invention. An example of this is the blogs we wrote during this past of months.
During this time of classes we have made a lot of
blogs about different topics some of them i enjoy it, but some of them i really
don’t. In general terms i have to say that this blogs were helpful, they allow
us to know how the otter things and fell about certain things. but i have to
say that i feel like this blogs didn’t help a lot to our writing skills, why?,
simple just because, we don’t have feedback about what we wrote is correct in
terms of grammar, yet it allow us to improve our capability of think about
different topics and star writing about them.
As i say before i feel like we are writing in the
air, is for this reason that i would like to include this "feedback"
like i say, yet is true that this can be hard for the teachers to do this,
considering the amount of students they have to attend. Still it would be nice
to have this.
we could speak about so different things about
infinite subjects, but i would really like to write more about things like the
past blog " From the invisible to the visible world and
back..." and less about topics like "The most enjoyable subject
..." blog,
Good introduction :) I like your post xD
ReplyDeleteHi Vicente,
ReplyDeleteIn relation to feedback: ask questions whenever you are in doubt: the teacher will always be ready to give you ideas, to help you in your writing, to find mistakes and correct them, ... Some of your classmates do this, but others are a bit shy and don´t do it. Most students do not like teachers looking over their shoulders, so I encourage you to ask for the teacher's help.
As to the themes, help us in choosing better ones. Remember that you and your classmates chose 3 themes: Music in my life; My favourite book and film; and "From the invisible to the visible world and back".
Thank you for your comments.
See you,